wow man, youre getting better right before our eyes.
the roundtree one is pretty good. the thing that i dont really like is the symmetry of it. im not a fan of the reversed renders. mostly because the numbers are backwards, and it just distracts me from the image as a whole. i like the effect on the main render though. the text is better, not sure if i like the overlap with the roy and the roundtree though. overall nice step up.
the Vlad one is real cool man. i just think you could darken the edges more to more of a black, and maybe lighten up the textures a bit more. i would do away with the " the next all american " text. i just think that it is labeling it too much (imo).
i would definitely make the right render much larger instead of the same size as the main one, and its clone to the left. it would just make it look more visually interesting. LOVE the Vlad the impaler concept though, nice work man.
this stuff is miles ahead of some of the other stuff that you have posted before. keep it up man. i would really like to team up with you on some peices, and share some renders/textures/techniques and whatnot. ive seen some of the stuff youve gotten off of getty. i think it would be cool to cut and share some renders.
PM me if you are interested, or just Email me at
JLange51@gmail.com -Jordan-
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